Blog Post- 4/3 Peer Review

Today in class we workshopped our papers in our groups. I looked at Savannah's paper and jaime's paper today. Just by the first read I know they're both going to have great ending results. I looked at Jaime's paper first and she did a good job on giving details to her characters. I said to her that my favorite part was when she was sleeping in the car with her friend, instead of a normal sleepover. My only suggestion to her was to elaborate on events. I looked on Savannah's paper next and she had great sentence structure, vocabulary and detail. My favorite part was her story with her little brother because I can definitely relate. My only suggestion to her was elaborate on a conversation with her parents.