Annotated Bibliograpghy Peer Review

“Figure 2f from: Irimia R, Gottschling M (2016) Taxonomic revision of Rochefortia Sw. (Ehretiaceae, Boraginales). Biodiversity Data Journal 4: e7720. https://Doi.org/10.3897/BDJ.4.e7720.” doi:10.3897/bdj.4.e7720.figure2f.

For the annotated bibliography of my group members, they each did a great job describing their sources. However, there are some things that can be changed to make the annotated bibliographies even better. In Prescott's first opening paragraph he can elaborate on the quote a bit more. As someone who does have a lot knowledge on the subject of bodybuilding, Prescott did a good job of providing detail about the topic and gave a good summary of what he learned. The reference made to the other article in conversation was done very well also with both sources. Prescott and Grant can each advance their papers by elaborating more on their second paragraphs regarding the focus of the article other than the thesis.